Nov 13, 2009 15:53
14 yrs ago
Spanish term
United States
servicios para autores académicos
Native in: English
Works in: Spanish to English, English
entre a
Spanish to English
Art/Literary
Textiles / Clothing / Fashion
I'm look for opinions please. My text is in a .jpeg, so I'm pasting in my translation for the context. My instincts are screaming at me to put "Welcome to Chiapas" rather "Come to Chiapas" (or ... any other options??). This guide is going to be marketed primarily in the state itself so it seems odd to say "Come to Chiapas" if the person is already there ...
Discover a paradise of opportunities, magical towns, world heritage sites, and two of Mexico’s three natural wonders, as well as historic cities and beautiful haciendas and coffee plantations. Entre a Chiapas.
Discover a paradise of opportunities, magical towns, world heritage sites, and two of Mexico’s three natural wonders, as well as historic cities and beautiful haciendas and coffee plantations. Entre a Chiapas.
Proposed translations
(English)
| 3 +5 | Experience |
Kate White
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| 3 +2 | Explore Chiapas. |
Robert Forstag
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| 3 | Chiapas from the inside/Chiapas. Come on in. |
patricia scott
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| 3 | Chiapas welcomes you. |
Cinnamon Nolan
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Proposed translations
+5
5 mins
Kate White
United Kingdom
United Kingdom
Native in English
Works in field
United Kingdom
Qualified, experienced, IT proficient
Native in: English
Works in: Spanish to English, Romanian to English
Related KudoZ points
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4
Selected
Experience
What about "Experience Chiapas" Sorry, I can´t think of anything much better.
Note from asker:
| Don't apologize--I like your answer. Thank you! |
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thanks...that works very well!"
+2
46 mins
Robert Forstag
United States
United States
Native in English
United States
Translating words, preserving meaning
Native in: English
Works in: Spanish to English, English
Related KudoZ points
:
35
Explore Chiapas.
That is, the local residents may know parts of the region, but may not have visited, or thoroughly explored, other areas.
Suerte.
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Note added at 49 mins (2009-11-13 16:43:33 GMT)
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Given the target audience, I think "explore" makes more sense than experience here. There may of course be still better options....
Suerte.
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Note added at 49 mins (2009-11-13 16:43:33 GMT)
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Given the target audience, I think "explore" makes more sense than experience here. There may of course be still better options....
Peer comment(s):
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Rosa Paredes
: Right on, once again, Robert.
3 hrs
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Thank you, Rosa.
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| agree |
Victoria Frazier
: Right concept again, Robert.
5 hrs
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Thanks, Vicky.
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1 hr
Chiapas from the inside/Chiapas. Come on in.
maybe
1 day 1 hr
Cinnamon Nolan
Spain
Spain
Native in English
Spain
Quality- Professionalism - Experience
Native in: English (Variants: US, US South, UK, British)
Works in: Spanish to English
Related KudoZ points
:
28
Chiapas welcomes you.
Or "Chiapas is ready to welcome you" ... some other options for you to consider.
Mauritius Welcomes You - The Official Site for Mauritius: What to Do, Where to Stay, General Information, What's on, Online Booking and other travel ...
www.mauritius.net
Steuben County Welcomes You! - Steuben County Bureau of TourismA listings of recreation, lodging, and entertainment.
www.lakes101.org/
Mauritius Welcomes You - The Official Site for Mauritius: What to Do, Where to Stay, General Information, What's on, Online Booking and other travel ...
www.mauritius.net
Steuben County Welcomes You! - Steuben County Bureau of TourismA listings of recreation, lodging, and entertainment.
www.lakes101.org/
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